I'm not dead!

Hi, guys! It's been a while, hasn't it? Well, Ben's laptop is fixed, but he's a dick and said "no" to dA. :/ But, I've been watching the Saw movies (again) and I made up my own trap! I'd love it if someone could draw this, animate, write, do somethin' with it. Here's the plan.

THE SHOWER TRAP
A man named Peter wakes up in a small shower. He tries to open the door, but it's locked shut. He cries for help, but a small puppet comes up to the glass of the shower on a tricycle. He explains that he wants to "play a game", and that the shower in front of him will pump acid, replacing water, slowly increasing pressure, until it he melts in half. However, he can unlock the case in which the shower controls are in, and turn them off in the 60-second period. He is supplied with a large kitchen knife, and in order to get the key, he must cut open his stomach and retrieve the key. The timer starts, and the acid starts flowing. Peter quickly jerks his legs back, and grabs the knife. He looks at it, and inhales. 50 seconds left. He jabs the knife in his chest, howling in agony. He quickly rips it out, and the pressure on the shower increases. 40 seconds left. He inhales again, and stabs it in his stomach, screaming, and slowly pulls it to the right, about halfway through. 35 seconds left. As the pressure increases, the acid gets to his legs a little. He quickly moves back. He puts the knife back in his stomach, and after the blood pours, the key flows out. He grabs the key and puts his hand through the acid. 15 seconds left. The pressure increases, and before he can put the key in, the key melts, snaps in half, and goes down the drain. 5 seconds on the timer. He screams that he did what he was supposed to do, and falls against the wall. The timer runs out, and the shower goes into full pressure. He yells in pain, and his face slowly starts to burn and peel off. He jerks around, and causes more of his body to melt. He screams one final time, and then his entire left side of his body is melted off. Game over.

Some hardcore shit, huh? Tell me what you guys think!